Critique Your Fiction Query Letter Or Synopsis
I will carefully proofread and strengthen your college application essay, personal statement, statement of purpose, letter of motivation, or recommendation letter. I will maintain your unique voice and experience while making the writing stronger and more memorable.
Over the last 15 years I have revised thousands of application essays, letters, and resumes. The most common problems are:
1. Too generic: I will help you add personal details about yourself and the school to which you are applying.
2. Too vague: I will help you choose powerful words to convince the reader that you are the ideal candidate.
3. Too tentative: I will help you express yourself with confidence, intelligence and enthusiasm.
Your revised application essay will convey your authentic self and grab the admissions officers attention.
Write an essay with everything you want to say, without worrying about whether you have chosen the right words. If you have gone over the word limit, we will work together to shorten it and make it more focused. In the end, you will have an essay that sounds like the best version of yourself!
Reviews
Fast response with clear communication. Thorough analysis including praise. Offered questions to guide my writing rather than dictating my query to me. Suggested different approaches in how to address query and synopsis while still giving strong guidance and parameters. Demonstrated clear understanding of industry standards and current trends. Answered questions before, during, and after purchase, and I feel comfortable to ask further follow up questions if needed.
Not only was this exactly what I needed, but also exceeded what I had hoped for.